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Improving “Glance
Readership” in Post Cards—Part 1
By Jeffrey Dobkin, marketing
consultant, author, and professional speaker
Face it: most people sort their mail over the trash
can.
This process works fast. Think back: you are a kid
and a friend is showing you baseball cards for
possible trades: gott’em, gott’em, need’em, gott’em,
gott’em, need’em, gott’em. 200 cards, 50 seconds.
Today’s mail…same thing. Bulk mail credit card
offers, magazine subscriptions, insurance
solicitations, penny stock hawkers all get the
briefest attention before being trashed.
But, post cards add another dimension to the
view-and-toss sorting process. Readership can be
quite high, instantly. Because - it’s all right
there, right in front of the reader—in his hand.
Post card readership is actually defined by how
great the creative is for your card. The fate of
your card starts in the hand of the mailer, which I
believe is you, isn’t it?
I call it “Glance Readership,” a term I coined,
well… just now, to explain what happens the moment a
post card lands in a reader’s hands. Glance
readership is the less-than-2-seconds spent on
reading your headline: 1 second on topic; 1 second
on copy; and the blink of an eye on graphics unless
they’re really dazzling.
Like an ad in a newspaper (remember them?) you only
get a second or two—readership reviews can be brutal
and end in the briefest of time followed directly by
the sudden downward spiral or your mailpiece—and
your money - into the circular file below.
Or, you can instantly get extremely highly-rated
reviews and have your postcard placed in the pile of
“read with the rest of the important mail.” It’s
your choice. So…what’s it gonna be? Right now,
you’ve got to ask yourself, “Am I feeling lucky?”
When your recipient gets a good look at the card,
you get either opportunity. Pass or fail. The
decision is immediate.
For us on the creative end of direct mail, it just
can’t get any better. Buy the right list and get one
of my cards into the correct reader’s hands: that’s
all I ask—I’ll get him to read it. Your direct
marketing agency will too, and if they can’t, find
another agency—plenty of good ones out there. Or
call me—I can use the money.
OK, so your potential reader is now standing there
with your card in his hand and that, my friend, is
where the chicken crossed the road…er, the rubber
meets the road. Or hit the road, or something about
the road. I forget—I have Alzheimer's. But…at least
I don’t have Alzheimer's!
Here’s where you need to force the reader to read
the card: compelling headline, followed by
intriguing copy and great, great graphics. Spend a
little more time and money here and what happens?
The reader reads the card.
Now, some nitty-gritty. How to do it.
“Glance readership” is 100% based on your headline
hook, appropriateness of subject to your audience,
layout and graphics, and certainly the value created
in your offer. Wrap all these elements in great
graphics and now your post card is presented in a
fast 2-second visual bite. Visually it’s the print
version of flipping channels on TV. The audio
version is the sound bits you hear on the evening
news or promos for the shows on MTV; which, come to
think of it, appear to be written by the same
writers.
While each post card reader has his or her own
mental preference files that compels him or her to
stay tuned into your card, some commonalities exist.
Wait. Wait just a moment. This gender thing of
saying “Him or Her” all the time has got to go—it’s
too clunky to keep saying “him or her, him or her,”
- so let me clear this up. I’ll just place
everything in the male gender until I get complaints
from, well, you know…
Glance Readership & the first round of sorting
So right on the top, your headline needs to be
great. If you have a good headline, ummmm—no. No!
Here, good is actually not good enough. You need
something more than just good, you need
“exceptionally great!” Create this one line
correctly, viola—instant maximum readership.
The first work-order of the day is to create an
unbelievably great, maximum-interest headline so the
reader stays in the copy and continues reading.
That’s the goal of the headline, nothing more: keep
the reader reading. No selling.
Since your opening headline needs to be G-R-E-A-T,
use the Jeff Dobkin 100-to-1 rule for creating
G-R-E-A-T headlines: write 100 headlines, go back
and pick out your best one, and use that. Oh, you
like this idea?! Plan to use it? OK, send me ten
bucks. Yeah, each time you use it. And you’re
getting away cheap. OK, just kidding. Just send $5.
The founding principle of high readership: Headline
= Great, or else. The objective of the headline is
to grab the attention of the reader and yank him
into the copy. This is NOT the time you sell your
product.
The first glance is the pivotal point in your
presentation that the reader has no commitment to
read further. He hasn’t invested any time in your
copy; he isn’t intrigued by whatever you’re selling
at whatever price; he hasn’t seen your electrifying
offer; he hasn’t followed your storyline for 10
paragraphs and wants to finish the other three to
see how you close the sale or the story finishes.
Nothing. No commitment - right now you’re just
another piece of paper with no heart, no soul. Man,
these first 2 seconds are critical.
At first glance, the card can be tossed without
regret if the headline sucks. Kindly recall that the
reader has lots of other mail, and has years of
practice of a fast standing-there-over-the
wastebasket first sorting time. You need to
instantly deliver: survive this cut or your mail
piece suffers death-by-wastebasket. Along with your
money. It’s the changeover point where your post
card stops being an “investment” and becomes an
“expense.”
The second round of sorting
Ok, like my first wife said about our marriage,
let’s get past this. Oh well, I thought it was a
good first week. Then I found out while only some
women marry you for money, they all divorce you for
it.
OK, so you and your post card made the first cut.
Congratulations. Great graphics, hellatious
headline, compelling, convincing copy; opulent,
irresistible offer. Having survived the first cut
following the “Glance Readership” rules, your card
now sits comfortably at the reader’s desk with the
rest of the “important” mail. Nice.
This “Second Look” opportunity gives your post card
the luxury of more time now that the reader has
taken it back to the comfort of his office, a
comfortable chair, a couple of beers, some good
smoke, and a little more time to invest. Or is that
just me? Anyhow, to survive the first glance means
the reader has made the decision he has an interest
in what you’re selling or at least in what you have
to say. Congratulations. Welcome to level two.
Download your FREE postal rate chart here!
---Source: This is
the first part of “Glance Readership,” a 3-article
series written by Jeffrey Dobkin. Jeffrey Dobkin is
a copywriter, speaker, and direct marketing
consultant. Call for his free instructional booklet
of direct marketing tips: 610/642-1000 or visit his
Web site at www.dobkin.com
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